Feedback....

Level 1

-Poorly Constructed
-Very Confusing
-Incomplete
-Lip syncing ineffective
-3 girls (what's going on?)
Struggles to get out of level 1-Poor

1.Holding a shot steady, where appropriate-sometimes?
2.Framing a shot as appropriate-not enough
3.using a variety of shot distances (w.a)
4.Shooting material appropriate to task set-NO
5.Selecting mise en scene-Poor mise en scene
6. Editing so meaning is apparent-NO
7.Using varied shot transitions, captions, effects-selectively + appropriately-NO
8.Using aound with images and editing appropriately-NO

START AGAIN!

-Keep it in one place
-Make best use of girls (Emotions in face!)
-Some performance (Drum/keyboard being played)
-Mise en scene-KEY

Recieving this feedback wasnt a shock to me. Because of not being able to actually finish my video and only completing about 50 seconds of it, to a very poor standard, the mark and level was pretty much what i was expecting. I belive that i can do better than that, and for the final thing i will start again and make it alot simpler and less confusing for the audience. I will stick to one loctaion and make it more of a performance video rather than one with a narrative.